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There’s only one Stevie May

We know your hair is gay

But if you can please just score

We’ll chip in for a whore

Walking in a May wonderland

 

Lines 2,3 and 5 just don't scan. Poor effort

 

 

EDIT...line 2.....insert "really" before "gay"

 

Line 3....remove "you can"

 

line 5.....swap "stevie" in place of "may"

 

 

it scans now, But is still shyte

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Im in, can't wait. This is the game for Stevie May to make his mark.

 

Theres only one Stevie May,

Theres only one Stevie May,

He may or may not,

He probably won't,

Walking in a Stevie Wonder land.

 

Decent effort, I liked that "he probably won't" line but not sure it followed on, he may or may not what? More thought required but an interesting idea.

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Decent effort, I liked that "he probably won't" line but not sure it followed on, he may or may not what? More thought required but an interesting idea.

 

You wot? That's a fekkin number one hit Trevor Horn would kill for. A deliberation/pun combo, a conclusion and a reference to a singer who is arguably a better goalscorer. It's got it all with rhythm and melody tied to a great bass line.

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